why a lame poem by me

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by dumbblonde16 (Newborn Zoner) on Sunday, 24-Jul-2005 1:37:28

why do you say you didnt love me the on phone the other night why did you fall best friend i thought you loved me i gusse you wanna be with her more then me why did you kiss her in front me that hurt really bad why did you treat me bad why werent you there 4 me like you said why did you ingore me when i called your name in the crowd so i gusse you never really loved me i gusse you played me why couldnt we work things out that was my lame poem just say it miranda you suck a writing so stop thats what people are gonna tell me so ill stop.

Post 2 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Sunday, 24-Jul-2005 9:03:32

No Miranda I will say that keep writing and believe in yourself, the fact that you post these poems, tells me they must mean something to you...either that, or you are far too hard on yourself.